Seeking Representation
Exhibit A, A Novel

Innocent Until

After a helpless classmate is framed for hacking a teacher's computer, impetuous sophomore Gibs risks his integrity, his best friend's trust, and his first romance to expose the school's untouchable soccer star, only to learn he's misjudged everyone's innocence, including his own.

Synopsis

Spoilers ahead, full plot details below

Fifteen-year-old GIBS WELLS is elbow-deep in sock-matching penance, serving house arrest for a messy bedroom, when his confiscated phone erupts. He sneaks outside to meet WOLFIE and ARI (who moved across the street a month ago and already feel like family) and hears the gossip everyone is talking about. A hacked computer and stolen exam answers sets off an unexpected scandal in their sleepy Connecticut school. After two tense days of suspicion, the accused turns out to be Gibs' 'sort of' friend, WENDELL GEORGE, the awkward, quietly talented artist, who's about as far from a criminal mastermind as it gets. Wendell swears he's innocent and begs Gibs to help defend him.

Gibs agrees, because no one else will, but soon uncovers a tangled motive: Wendell and LUKE LANGLEY, the school's untouchable soccer star and Wendell's chief tormentor are about to be stepbrothers, already living under the same roof. Convinced Luke framed Wendell, Gibs' investigation escalates fast and recklessly, jeopardizing his friendship with Ari, who begins falling for Luke, and sparking a new flirtation with Gibs' long-time crush, BETH BENTLEY, who suddenly seems to be flirting back. From searching the math teacher's office to raiding Luke's gym locker to sneaking into Luke's bedroom during a Halloween party, Gibs finds exactly the evidence he's looking for, including the smoking gun: printed screenshots of the exam answers. Gibs' case against Luke looks airtight.

After the first hearing, Luke's friends corner Gibs in a menacing encounter, which turns out to be a stress-driven hallucination, foreshadowing how thoroughly Gibs' preconceptions have gotten away from him. At the reconvened hearing, Luke dismantles Gibs' case point by point, and a photo provided by teammate, MIKEY NEAL, proves Wendell is guilty. Wendell confesses, and a humiliated Gibs storms out, feeling betrayed.

That night, Beth comforts Gibs and they share their first kiss. Later, Gibs glimpses an incriminating text on Beth's phone and uncovers the real conspiracy: Beth and Mikey have secretly been dating and were the true masterminds behind the hacking scandal, manipulating both Wendell and Gibs. Beth begs for understanding, insisting her feelings were real, but the night ends in heartbreak when Gibs, unable to move past her deception, ends things.

Gibs reconciles with Wendell and has a raw confrontation with Luke, invoking Ari's faith in them both to find common ground. At the final hearing, Gibs shares a clearer picture of Wendell's character, Luke apologizes publicly to Wendell, and Wendell is spared from expulsion. The novel closes at the local ice cream shop, where Gibs' friend group has grown to include Luke, his former prime suspect, and Wendell, no longer just a 'sort of' friend. Gibs, genuinely happy for Luke and Ari, hints that his own feelings for her are a story still waiting to be told.

Innocent Until is about the verdicts we hand down about people and the relationships strong enough to survive being wrong. Seeing clearly and generously, it turns out, is only half the work. The other half is acting on it.

StatusQuerying literary agents
CategoryContemporary Young Adult
Word Count53,722

First impression, or the whole story? Click each card.

"Wendell's the quiet art kid who keeps to himself. Something about that feels a little off."
First impression →
His quiet was never a clue to anything. It was just the safest way he'd found to go unnoticed, and it said nothing about what he was capable of, for better or worse.
← The fuller account
"Luke's the soccer captain everyone's a little afraid of. Being a jerk just comes with the job."
First impression →
He'd just been playing the part everyone expected. Once he stopped caring about the pecking order, he turned out to be someone who could actually care deeply about people.
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"Gibs is sure he can spot who's guilty."
First impression →
Blinded by his own confirmation bias, Gibs decides who's guilty based on nothing more than stereotypes and assumptions. He has to learn that people are never simply good or bad, but far more complex than any first impression could capture.
← The fuller account

Sample: Chapter One

Saturday, October 24, 11:00am

When the news broke, I was in my room pairing an impossible heap of single socks. I wish I'd been doing something more meaningful like dominating a VR battlefield or saving stray kittens (depending on who's asking). Now when I tell this story, my life just sounds dull. But the fact is, at the moment the scandal hit, I was doing nothing more interesting than laundry.

To be clear, I was not pairing socks by choice. I was under house arrest until every last inch of my room was clean. That's standard sentencing in my house. Dad set his police badge on the bed next to me while he surveyed the damage. His signature power move. Mom stood in the doorway with her courtroom face and fed him the allegations. They cited mixed piles of clean and dirty laundry, scattered debris from a bombed-out Lego warcraft, old grilled cheese staining the carpet, and an explosion of Starburst wrappers that almost defied gravity. I argued that my constitutional right to free expression extended to the state of my bedroom. Brilliant, right? But when Mom found crumpled pants balanced on the edge of my fish tank, one leg swimming in the green scum at the rim, I knew the verdict would be guilty. Guilty of being a slob.

I named Magoo, our fat and very clumsy cat, as a co-defendant, but admissible evidence on Magoo is hard to come by, so I finally conceded. Mom put one hand on her hip and stretched the other out to me. She didn't have to say a word. I accepted my sentence and handed over my phone. You'd think at fifteen, they'd stop taking my phone, but apparently as long as I act like a child, they'll treat me like a child. That's a direct quote. For the record, it's not fair that I live with a cop and a lawyer.

I flicked a striped dress sock and watched it fold in on itself like it had given up. I wish I could give up. Pairing socks is a huge waste of time. Socks never stay together. I know it. You know it. The world knows it. Meanwhile, Mom is out there running a sock dating service, intent on finding a mate for each one. If I get in her way, she'll just turn her matchmaking on me, and frankly, I've seen her track record with socks. I grabbed a lone sport sock and continued the hunt. Fun-loving, single white sock seeks partner for pickleball and long walks in the park. A commitment to sharing a drawer and staying together through the spin cycle preferred. No birkenstocks.

I was laughing at the absurd singles profile when I heard my phone ping down the hall. It pinged once, then twice, then multiple times in quick succession like pulses of Morse code dispatching an urgent message. I cracked my door and listened. There was silence for all of five seconds before a deluge of chimes, whistles, and the words "I'm never gonna give you up…never gonna let you down…" poured out of my phone. Normally I'd applaud whoever had Rickrolled my ringtone (probably Dad, always a few trends behind) but at that moment what it signaled was no joke. Something big was spreading through my digital world like wildfire and the only source of intel lay confiscated in my parents' room.

Magoo thumped onto the sill outside my window, distracting me for a moment. He pawed at the pane and hit his head against the glass until he looked dazed. His sagging belly made the endeavor particularly precarious, and I jumped up to raise the window before he fell. Magoo blinked his appreciation and waddled inside, taking time to rub his back against the frame. As I waited for him to scratch the sweet spot at the base of his tail, I saw Wolfie and Ari running from their house across the street. They waved their arms wildly, miming for me to come outside. Between my friends' frantic gestures and the cacophony coming from my phone, it was clear, something had hit the fan and I had to know what. In the two hours I'd been stuck in my room, I'd made little headway through the filth. Sneaking out was always risky. If I got caught, I'd face extended house arrest, or worse, cleaning the cat box indefinitely.

"Screw it," I thought and slinked down the hall. At the top of the stairs Magoo launched himself under my legs and I stumbled loudly down the first few steps. Frozen, with my arms clinging to the banister, I was sure I'd been exposed. Fortunately, the TV was on in my parents' room, and I managed to slip undetected the rest of the way out the front door.

The moment I stepped outside, Wolfie jumped on me. Three salacious words burst like fireworks from his mouth.

"They got him!"

I stared at my friends while my mind filled in the blanks.

"They got him!" Wolfie said again.

"It's true. It's all over school," Ari added.

My mouth actually filled with saliva. Scandal was rare in our sleepy suburban school, and I was surprised by my thirst to know more. I pulled them into a huddle. "Tell me everything."

Wolfie grabbed my shoulder tight. "Gibs," he said seriously, "you won't believe who it is."

Author Bio

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  • B.A., Ethics, Principia College
  • J.D., Vermont Law School
  • Graduate studies, Social Work, Washington University in St. Louis

Erin K.M. Rainwater has spent her career showing up for young people navigating the complexities of growing up. Her path has taken her from teaching high schoolers about ethics and the law to college student affairs and civil rights offices, working directly with emerging young adults during moments of hardship and success, and supporting students as they build character through conflict, resolution, and the process of figuring out what they value, what's true, and what's fair.

That work has given her a front-row seat to how easy it is to make assumptions, let bias drive belief, and misjudge or misrepresent people.

She's also seen how much vulnerability true empathy requires, how much courage it takes to stand up for the person everyone else has already written off, and how messy the process of "figuring out the truth" really is.

When not writing or untangling campus policy and student drama (proof that she can't resist a good plot twist, professional or otherwise), Erin can be found on the coast of Maine dreaming up new characters, or workshopping scenes with the young adults in her life, who are blunt, unpaid, and usually right.

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Written between student conduct hearings and the Maine tideline, wherever the truth needed the most room to unfold.